Day 18 of Writing 101: The Package

The Package

Arpita Pramanick

It says it is in Bhiwandi, Maharashtra, India. I do not know if Bhiwandi is a city or a town. I wonder, though, what it looks like.

I am zooming in. The satellite picture shows green and brown, but nothing is clear. So much for technology!

A notification beeps in my cellphone. The package has moved. Now, the painful wait begins.

Three days later, criss-crossing the country, changing hands, it rings as the doorbell.

The man is dark. He is wearing dark blue coveralls and a blue-and-red cap.

“Two hundred and seventy nine rupees, ma’am,” he says.

I hand him the money, counted to the exact rupee. I know these people well. They never return the one-rupee change.

The man hands me the package. I caress it like a long lost kin.

“Thank you for shopping with us, ma’am.” The man bares his malformed teeth. Ugh!

“Yeah, okay, okay!” I shut the door on his face. I can’t wait one more second to tear the cover and hold the treasure in my own hands.

No longer I care what they say about my craft.Β If no one else buys my book, I will!

I know what I should do. I’ll just order another hundred copies!

CopyrightΒ Β© 2015 Arpita Pramanick


About Arpita

Arpita is currently working as an analyst in Mu Sigma, Bangalore. While she loves her job, but her heart is tied deeply to creative outlets. Reading, writing, travelling, and more recently, making videos excite her and shape her day to day life. She's also very approachable and is willing to pick a conversation if she happens to meet you.
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24 Responses to Day 18 of Writing 101: The Package

  1. Riju says:

    Is Writing101 a list of prompts for blog posts?

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  2. sarthak0501 says:

    I love your dedication. I am sure you will achieve what you want. (Y)

    Liked by 2 people

  3. rosemawrites says:

    HAHA! This made me laugh, Appy! I like the spirit of your character. πŸ˜€

    BTW, I am almost done with your book! πŸ˜€

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  4. Where can we buy your book and what is it about? πŸ™‚ I enjoyed the post, I was hanging to every word! Haha

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  6. sukanyasaha says:

    Ha ha ha… This post is sooo interesting πŸ™‚ πŸ™‚ πŸ˜€ πŸ˜€ πŸ˜€
    It intrigued me till the end what was inside the package (especially when we buy something online you see πŸ™‚ πŸ˜› )
    The end is superb ^_^

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  7. anankhan98 says:

    Haha! I’m probably gonna do that when I’m published. And start distributing! Lol. Good one, Arpita.

    Liked by 1 person

  8. Annie says:

    Oooh I was wondering what it was that the person was buying! Great post!

    Liked by 1 person

  9. mterrazas32 says:

    Haha! I smile reading this Arpita. Great post.

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